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| author | Julian Blake Kongslie | 2012-01-03 22:52:55 -0800 |
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| committer | Julian Blake Kongslie | 2012-01-03 22:52:55 -0800 |
| commit | 65f8f681cc62060fac7c034c3175333b3f30f15c (patch) | |
| tree | 17b78e2cad369d29445614d3e4a15e1a2e1f1895 /oneshots | |
| parent | Starting actual writing on A Little Greed. (diff) | |
| download | writing-65f8f681cc62060fac7c034c3175333b3f30f15c.tar.xz | |
Mostly fixes to A Little Greed chapter 1, some minor cleanups in other places.
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| -rw-r--r-- | oneshots/four-weeks.mdwn | 8 |
1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/oneshots/four-weeks.mdwn b/oneshots/four-weeks.mdwn index 8895c61..5a3dfa7 100644 --- a/oneshots/four-weeks.mdwn +++ b/oneshots/four-weeks.mdwn | |||
| @@ -72,10 +72,10 @@ point-blank range, and he narrowly avoided crashing into the castle walls. Harry | |||
| 72 | was sorely tempted to abandon Ron outside on the roofs, but he couldn't do that | 72 | was sorely tempted to abandon Ron outside on the roofs, but he couldn't do that |
| 73 | to his first friend. | 73 | to his first friend. |
| 74 | 74 | ||
| 75 | Not yet, anyway. If that window was closed, Harry wasn't sure he'd be | 75 | Not yet, anyway. If that window was closed, Harry wasn't sure he'd be able to |
| 76 | able to force himself to bring Ron back to the dorm. Perhaps Ron would enjoy | 76 | force himself to bring Ron back to the dorm. Perhaps Ron would enjoy floating |
| 77 | floating all night on the lake; Harry knew in the muggle world waterbeds were | 77 | all night on the lake; Harry knew in the muggle world waterbeds were reasonably |
| 78 | reasonably popular. | 78 | popular. |
| 79 | 79 | ||
| 80 | Fortunately for Harry's conscience, the open window was just where he remembered | 80 | Fortunately for Harry's conscience, the open window was just where he remembered |
| 81 | it. | 81 | it. |