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| @@ -170,8 +170,9 @@ Strangely, perhaps, he found himself enjoying it. | |||
| 170 | > McGonagall and Wood. So he never realizes that she's *complimenting* him, and | 170 | > McGonagall and Wood. So he never realizes that she's *complimenting* him, and |
| 171 | > instead constructs a narrative in his mind of mockery and punishment. Once the | 171 | > instead constructs a narrative in his mind of mockery and punishment. Once the |
| 172 | > resentment sets in, I think the progression is obvious; Harry starts to | 172 | > resentment sets in, I think the progression is obvious; Harry starts to |
| 173 | > isolate himself because he's being punished, which prevents him from rising to | 173 | > restrain himself from acting out because he's being punished, which prevents |
| 174 | > Malfoy's taunts, which isolates him from Ron and endears him to Hermione. | 174 | > him from rising to Malfoy's taunts, which isolates him from Ron and endears |
| 175 | > him to Hermione. | ||
| 175 | 176 | ||
| 176 | > Right now it seems like this is a oneshot, but I suppose it might turn into a | 177 | > Right now it seems like this is a oneshot, but I suppose it might turn into a |
| 177 | > genuine novella if it's turning out interesting. | 178 | > genuine novella if it's turning out interesting. |