From a901197441a17b094455ac4dcdc7b349a42fef72 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Julian Blake Kongslie Date: Fri, 13 Jan 2012 23:37:23 -0800 Subject: About half of chapter 2, A Little Greed. --- novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn') diff --git a/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn b/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn index 37411f7..abb4198 100644 --- a/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn +++ b/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn @@ -150,8 +150,8 @@ summon Sharpaxe, the current Head of the Potter Accounts. The active foreman noticed all this activity and called Steelgash from Potential Difficulties, who upon hearing the situation summoned Urgnok from Wizarding Relations to assist. Urgnok understood exactly who the Boy-Who-Lived was, and sent an urgent request -for advice to Ragnok, supreme branch manager and effective head of Goblin -government in Britain. +for advice to Warlord Ragnok, supreme branch manager and effective head of +Goblin government in Britain. Ragnok found himself faced with a plainly unacceptable situation. Less than a day after Dumbledore had strode into his bank and outright demanded that they @@ -366,9 +366,9 @@ feel of the equipment as early as possible. Harry's last stop for the day was an examination by the Matriarch for any prophecies that entangled his fate. She was an ancient and hideous Goblin, blinded at an early age when she first showed signs of divinatory talent and -locked away in a dark cave to focus on improving her focus. After many years of -rituals and practice, she could feel the influence of the future on any brought -before her within moments. +locked away in a dark cave to improve her focus. After many years of rituals and +practice, she could feel the influence of the future on any brought before her +within moments. The blind Oracle passed her hand over Harry, her face locked in a growl of concentration. Long minutes passed, with the uneven smoke of torches coiling -- cgit v1.2.3