From e13b6bf93b425bdde84a7e55fd44617dc4f24af1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Julian Blake Kongslie
Date: Thu, 15 Nov 2012 14:25:47 -0800
Subject: Tiny little edits.

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 novellas/contingency/01-plans.mdwn | 10 +++++-----
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diff --git a/novellas/contingency/01-plans.mdwn b/novellas/contingency/01-plans.mdwn
index ffd41da..faf8807 100644
--- a/novellas/contingency/01-plans.mdwn
+++ b/novellas/contingency/01-plans.mdwn
@@ -30,14 +30,14 @@ was certain, but he *did* trust her, more than anything.
 
 "OK, Hermione. What do we need to do?"
 
-"Just a quick trip to the Ring of Brodgar. It's the nearest of the old ritual
-sites to here that's still intact. This is the right time of year, and it's a
-full moon, so we can do the ritual tonight."
+"Just a quick trip to the Ring of Brodgar. This is the right time of year, and
+it's a full moon, so we can do the ritual tonight."
 
 "The Ring of Brodgar?"
 
-"It's like Stonehenge. The old ritual sites, they're like batteries collecting
-magic. We're going to borrow some of that magic."
+"It's like Stonehenge, but up north in the Orkney islands, and it's still
+functional and mostly hidden from the muggles. The old ritual sites, they're
+like batteries collecting magic. We're going to borrow some of that magic."
 
 "And that'll make us stronger, so we can defeat Tom?"
 
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