From 52333416b3e0101b3635e7348f0a15ffa5c5aa09 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Julian Blake Kongslie
Date: Thu, 29 May 2014 14:08:57 -0700
Subject: Minor editing changes to make the text flavor a little nicer.

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 novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'novellas')

diff --git a/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn b/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn
index 260ec21..b25efb5 100644
--- a/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn
+++ b/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ mental note to contact her sister as soon as possible. Last she'd heard from
 Lily, there was some trouble and she'd been told that all contact had to go
 through the lawyers at some bank called Gringotts. Goblins, if you can believe
 that. Whimsical nonsense; Petunia was glad her child would never get caught up
-in such a stupid culture.
+in such an abnormal culture.
 
 Petunia set about preparing breakfast for herself and her family. The baby was
 set aside for the time in the living room; it had waited outside in the cold,
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ had accompanied this morning's unwelcome guest.
 
 Well, now there's something. Her freak of a sister had gotten herself killed,
 and the child was her nephew, Harry. Of course Lily's son would get dumped on
-her in such a manner. It was just like her.
+her in such a manner. It was just like Lily to be so freakish.
 
 But then, it *wasn't* just like her. As much as Petunia loathed her sister,
 she knew Lily would never abandon her child like this. Lily was always a
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