From 91c8855f3b1cccf7d34581959d0a4e3d63ed5a6d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Julian Blake Kongslie
Date: Tue, 22 Jan 2013 22:50:07 -0800
Subject: A minor change to the author's note in Punishment.

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 oneshots/punishment.mdwn | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'oneshots')

diff --git a/oneshots/punishment.mdwn b/oneshots/punishment.mdwn
index bd4d9a5..75dd580 100644
--- a/oneshots/punishment.mdwn
+++ b/oneshots/punishment.mdwn
@@ -170,8 +170,9 @@ Strangely, perhaps, he found himself enjoying it.
 > McGonagall and Wood. So he never realizes that she's *complimenting* him, and
 > instead constructs a narrative in his mind of mockery and punishment. Once the
 > resentment sets in, I think the progression is obvious; Harry starts to
-> isolate himself because he's being punished, which prevents him from rising to
-> Malfoy's taunts, which isolates him from Ron and endears him to Hermione.
+> restrain himself from acting out because he's being punished, which prevents
+> him from rising to Malfoy's taunts, which isolates him from Ron and endears
+> him to Hermione.
 
 > Right now it seems like this is a oneshot, but I suppose it might turn into a
 > genuine novella if it's turning out interesting.
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