From 4d357ba411dd19149434b492f5c8a29906a7aeb6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Julian Blake Kongslie Date: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 22:27:05 -0700 Subject: Reflowing text. --- outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn | 36 +++++++++++++++++++----------------- 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-) (limited to 'outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn') diff --git a/outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn b/outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn index 770dacd..c51c591 100644 --- a/outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn +++ b/outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn @@ -22,12 +22,13 @@ coherent manner. Depth of storytelling, I suspect, is a skill that will take me some time to learn. Although I have many notes here, they are primarily descriptive rather than -prescriptive. Being the first work of this size I have attempted, I expect to do -significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story. +prescriptive. Being the first work of this size I have attempted, I expect to +do significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story. * Harry winds up *completely* self-motivated. He is *clearly* superior to all - those *humans*, viewing himself as a Goblin who happens to have access to some - really amazing legal rights and loopholes through an accident of genetics. + those *humans*, viewing himself as a Goblin who happens to have access to + some really amazing legal rights and loopholes through an accident of + genetics. * Why does Harry attend Hogwarts? He's an *asset* as a fully-trained wizard; imagine what the Goblins plan to do with one of their own seen as a returning hero to Wizarding Britain, and eventually to take a seat as a Lord in the @@ -35,17 +36,18 @@ significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story. * I am honestly not sure what house Harry is in. * Gryffindor - he is trained as a warrior. * Ravenclaw - as a Goblin, he is an unremarkable warrior, but he is very - interested in learning Wizarding magic so as to exploit his great advantage. + interested in learning Wizarding magic so as to exploit his great + advantage. * Slytherin - from a Human perspective, his morals are off the wall; he is *insanely* cunning and ambitious. * Hufflepuff - he is loyal to the Goblin nation, after all. * History of Magic classes do not go well. * Snape's antagonism can go different ways. - * If Harry sees him as a genuine enemy, then Snape is going to have to go down - *hard.* Goblin-raised Harry would not tolerate being attacked. - * On the other hand, if Harry's upbringing was full of harsh personalities and - general antagonism, then Snape might be the only professor that Harry really - *likes.* + * If Harry sees him as a genuine enemy, then Snape is going to have to go + down *hard.* Goblin-raised Harry would not tolerate being attacked. + * On the other hand, if Harry's upbringing was full of harsh personalities + and general antagonism, then Snape might be the only professor that Harry + really *likes.* * Flitwick is probably in on the plan. * This is a point in favor of Ravenclaw house. * On the other hand, Harry is raised as a Goblin, while Flitwick is raised as @@ -72,9 +74,9 @@ significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story. Goblin morals, splitting the soul is done a little differently. Harry donates to charity. The pain almost kills him. * At the end of year 1, Harry is attacked by Voldemort (while Harry is taking - advantage of Dumbledore's absence to steal the stone for himself) and learns - that Voldemort is the one who attempted to steal from Gringotts. Harry, - being an admitted hypocrit, takes this *personally*. + advantage of Dumbledore's absence to steal the stone for himself) and + learns that Voldemort is the one who attempted to steal from Gringotts + Harry, being an admitted hypocrit, takes this *personally*. * Harry reclaims Goblin artifacts aggressively. Gryffindor's sword in year 2. The Goblet of Fire in year 4, *before* the names are drawn. * Ideally, a huge buildup to a new Goblin revolution. @@ -92,8 +94,8 @@ significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story. improved relationship between the Goblins and the muggles. The muggle government will openly side with the Goblins in any rebellion. * Harry needs a proxy for his Wizengamot seat. I'm totally going to make it - Petunia. Her hatred of freaks is *perfect*, and she could be swayed into it by - being offered the position by the Queen of England. + Petunia. Her hatred of freaks is *perfect*, and she could be swayed into it + by being offered the position by the Queen of England. There are lots of OCs in this work, many of whom are Goblins whose names I have trouble remembering, even though I'm the one who came up with them. @@ -104,8 +106,8 @@ trouble remembering, even though I'm the one who came up with them. given to Petunia for the purchase of Harry. * Bloodrock is the Head of Foreign Tax-Related Disbursements. * Culthok is the Head of Hogwarts Accounts. -* Goldknife is the Healer responsible for Harry. She yearns to someday work as a - Disemboweler instead. +* Goldknife is the Healer responsible for Harry. She yearns to someday work as + a Disemboweler instead. * Lacksack is the thief Harry whose execution Harry prevented, and the first Liar. * The Matriarch is an Oracle, who counted the prophetic enemies of Harry. -- cgit v1.2.3