From a11a8b9445220e8cde6279bf9dc8331aba328415 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Julian Blake Kongslie Date: Thu, 8 Dec 2011 16:56:53 -0800 Subject: Notes on another new story idea. --- outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn | 60 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 1 file changed, 60 insertions(+) create mode 100644 outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn (limited to 'outlines') diff --git a/outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn b/outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn new file mode 100644 index 0000000..730610b --- /dev/null +++ b/outlines/a-little-greed.mdwn @@ -0,0 +1,60 @@ +[[!meta title="A Little Greed"]] + +The morning that Petunia discovers Harry on her doorstep, she makes a decision: +Lilly would not have left Harry to her without also leaving her some monetary +compensation. She remembers the Goblins, and makes her way to Gringotts, +demanding to see the will. The Goblins find a clause: + +"Our son, Harry Potter, is to be left to the care of whomsoever the Goblins of +Gringotts find best suited to raise him." + +Petunia is sent on her way (with a small token or something from the will). +Obviously, no-one in the Wizarding world would be *best* suited to raise Harry; +they'd raise him as a *Wizard*, and Wizards are (in the minds of Goblins) all +terrible people. The Goblins raise Harry as one of their own. + +This is an exploration of Harry with inhuman morals and drives. + +* Harry winds up *completely* self-motivated. He is *clearly* superior to all + those *humans*, viewing himself as a Goblin who happens to have access to some + really amazing legal rights and loopholes through an accident of genetics. +* Why does Harry attend Hogwarts? He's an *asset* as a fully-trained wizard; + imagine what the Goblins plan to do with one of their own seen as a returning + hero to Wizarding Britain, and eventually to take a seat as a Lord in the + Wizengamot. +* I am honestly not sure what house Harry is in. + * Gryffindor - he is trained as a warrior. + * Ravenclaw - as a Goblin, he is an unremarkable warrior, but he is very + interested in learning Wizarding magic so as to exploit his great advantage. + * Slytherin - from a Human perspective, his morals are off the wall; he is + *insanely* cunning and ambitious. + * Hufflepuff - he is loyal to the Goblin nation, after all. +* History of Magic classes do not go well. +* Harry spends his childhood training as a Goblin; their lives are shorter and + faster than Human, so he mostly completes this training prior to Hogwarts. + * Harry is, at best, "nearly adequate" at fighting. He lacks Goblin speed and + strength. + * Some wandless magic, but not impressive. This can change over the years, as + he gets more formal studies in Wizarding magics. + * Absolute *hatred* for a vast majority of wizards, especially purebloods. + Harry spent time under a glamor working the counters at Gringotts, and he + has more than a little bit of a grudge. +* The children at Hogwarts he doesn't-yet-hate ("friends", but he doesn't use + that word) are pushed to see Goblins as fair and honorable. He's recruiting + for the Goblin nation, after all! +* The conflict with Voldemort gets *weird*: + * Harry had the horcrux removed shortly after the adoption, as a general + health concern. + * The Goblins were not particularly shocked or disgusted by the horcrux. They + are perfectly reasonable devices for immortality. Sadly, without wands they + lack the ability to make their own. + * Harry plans to construct at least one horcrux for himself. As someone with + Goblin morals, splitting the soul is done a little differently. Harry + donates to charity. The pain almost kills him. + * At the end of year 1, Harry is attacked by Voldemort (while Harry is taking + advantage of Dumbledore's absence to steal the stone for himself) and learns + that Voldemort is the one who attempted to steal from Gringotts. Harry, + being an admitted hypocrit, takes this *personally*. +* Harry reclaims Goblin artifacts aggressively. Gryffindor's sword in year 2. + The Goblet of Fire in year 4, *before* the names are drawn. +* Ideally, a huge buildup to a new Goblin revolution. -- cgit v1.2.3