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| author | Julian Blake Kongslie | 2012-02-02 16:54:45 -0800 |
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| committer | Julian Blake Kongslie | 2012-02-02 16:54:45 -0800 |
| commit | 87e702b35f7c3fd0b1361134aced6ea784e0f247 (patch) | |
| tree | e1c53de48041aacbd504214ce202822773fafc01 | |
| parent | Just some tiny outline additions. (diff) | |
| download | writing-87e702b35f7c3fd0b1361134aced6ea784e0f247.tar.xz | |
Trivial change to still-in-progress ch 2 of Greed.
| -rw-r--r-- | novellas/a-little-greed/02-honor.mdwn | 3 |
1 files changed, 2 insertions, 1 deletions
diff --git a/novellas/a-little-greed/02-honor.mdwn b/novellas/a-little-greed/02-honor.mdwn index ba1011a..88337c9 100644 --- a/novellas/a-little-greed/02-honor.mdwn +++ b/novellas/a-little-greed/02-honor.mdwn | |||
| @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ Culthok could be unavailable more often! | |||
| 123 | 123 | ||
| 124 | Lacksack staggered as he exited the conference room, his blood already starting | 124 | Lacksack staggered as he exited the conference room, his blood already starting |
| 125 | to boil in his veins. Ragnok awaited him in the office across the hall, and | 125 | to boil in his veins. Ragnok awaited him in the office across the hall, and |
| 126 | presented a goblet of fine screechnap wine, the traditional gift to a Goblin | 126 | presented a goblet of fine screechsnap wine, the traditional gift to a Goblin |
| 127 | retiring from active duty in the bank. Lacksack drank, and sat to await his | 127 | retiring from active duty in the bank. Lacksack drank, and sat to await his |
| 128 | death. He had regained his honor; the first Liar had brought profit to his Bank. | 128 | death. He had regained his honor; the first Liar had brought profit to his Bank. |
| 129 | 129 | ||
| @@ -223,6 +223,7 @@ magic very nearly burned down the theatre. | |||
| 223 | > * Another profit-making scheme of Harry's. | 223 | > * Another profit-making scheme of Harry's. |
| 224 | > * Mention Dumbledore holding the Potter vote's proxy? | 224 | > * Mention Dumbledore holding the Potter vote's proxy? |
| 225 | > * Harry working as a Teller, interaction with Malfoys? | 225 | > * Harry working as a Teller, interaction with Malfoys? |
| 226 | > * Meetings with muggle-born children, to establish some sort of respect? | ||
| 226 | > | 227 | > |
| 227 | > My goal length needs some 1500-1600 words. I suspect with these I can fill it | 228 | > My goal length needs some 1500-1600 words. I suspect with these I can fill it |
| 228 | > to that length; I'd like this chapter to be the complete raised-as-a-Goblin | 229 | > to that length; I'd like this chapter to be the complete raised-as-a-Goblin |
