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authorJulian Blake Kongslie2013-01-22 22:50:07 -0800
committerJulian Blake Kongslie2013-01-22 22:50:07 -0800
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170> McGonagall and Wood. So he never realizes that she's *complimenting* him, and 170> McGonagall and Wood. So he never realizes that she's *complimenting* him, and
171> instead constructs a narrative in his mind of mockery and punishment. Once the 171> instead constructs a narrative in his mind of mockery and punishment. Once the
172> resentment sets in, I think the progression is obvious; Harry starts to 172> resentment sets in, I think the progression is obvious; Harry starts to
173> isolate himself because he's being punished, which prevents him from rising to 173> restrain himself from acting out because he's being punished, which prevents
174> Malfoy's taunts, which isolates him from Ron and endears him to Hermione. 174> him from rising to Malfoy's taunts, which isolates him from Ron and endears
175> him to Hermione.
175 176
176> Right now it seems like this is a oneshot, but I suppose it might turn into a 177> Right now it seems like this is a oneshot, but I suppose it might turn into a
177> genuine novella if it's turning out interesting. 178> genuine novella if it's turning out interesting.