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@@ -22,12 +22,13 @@ coherent manner. Depth of storytelling, I suspect, is a skill that will take me
 some time to learn.
 
 Although I have many notes here, they are primarily descriptive rather than
-prescriptive. Being the first work of this size I have attempted, I expect to do
-significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story.
+prescriptive. Being the first work of this size I have attempted, I expect to
+do significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story.
 
 * Harry winds up *completely* self-motivated. He is *clearly* superior to all
-  those *humans*, viewing himself as a Goblin who happens to have access to some
-  really amazing legal rights and loopholes through an accident of genetics.
+  those *humans*, viewing himself as a Goblin who happens to have access to
+  some really amazing legal rights and loopholes through an accident of
+  genetics.
 * Why does Harry attend Hogwarts? He's an *asset* as a fully-trained wizard;
   imagine what the Goblins plan to do with one of their own seen as a returning
   hero to Wizarding Britain, and eventually to take a seat as a Lord in the
@@ -35,17 +36,18 @@ significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story.
 * I am honestly not sure what house Harry is in.
   * Gryffindor - he is trained as a warrior.
   * Ravenclaw - as a Goblin, he is an unremarkable warrior, but he is very
-    interested in learning Wizarding magic so as to exploit his great advantage.
+    interested in learning Wizarding magic so as to exploit his great
+    advantage.
   * Slytherin - from a Human perspective, his morals are off the wall; he is
     *insanely* cunning and ambitious.
   * Hufflepuff - he is loyal to the Goblin nation, after all.
 * History of Magic classes do not go well.
 * Snape's antagonism can go different ways.
-  * If Harry sees him as a genuine enemy, then Snape is going to have to go down
-    *hard.* Goblin-raised Harry would not tolerate being attacked.
-  * On the other hand, if Harry's upbringing was full of harsh personalities and
-    general antagonism, then Snape might be the only professor that Harry really
-    *likes.*
+  * If Harry sees him as a genuine enemy, then Snape is going to have to go
+    down *hard.* Goblin-raised Harry would not tolerate being attacked.
+  * On the other hand, if Harry's upbringing was full of harsh personalities
+    and general antagonism, then Snape might be the only professor that Harry
+    really *likes.*
 * Flitwick is probably in on the plan.
   * This is a point in favor of Ravenclaw house.
   * On the other hand, Harry is raised as a Goblin, while Flitwick is raised as
@@ -72,9 +74,9 @@ significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story.
     Goblin morals, splitting the soul is done a little differently. Harry
     donates to charity. The pain almost kills him.
   * At the end of year 1, Harry is attacked by Voldemort (while Harry is taking
-    advantage of Dumbledore's absence to steal the stone for himself) and learns
-    that Voldemort is the one who attempted to steal from Gringotts. Harry,
-    being an admitted hypocrit, takes this *personally*.
+    advantage of Dumbledore's absence to steal the stone for himself) and
+    learns that Voldemort is the one who attempted to steal from Gringotts
+    Harry, being an admitted hypocrit, takes this *personally*.
 * Harry reclaims Goblin artifacts aggressively. Gryffindor's sword in year 2.
   The Goblet of Fire in year 4, *before* the names are drawn.
 * Ideally, a huge buildup to a new Goblin revolution.
@@ -92,8 +94,8 @@ significant revisions and nonlinear editing as I rework the story.
   improved relationship between the Goblins and the muggles. The muggle
   government will openly side with the Goblins in any rebellion.
 * Harry needs a proxy for his Wizengamot seat. I'm totally going to make it
-  Petunia. Her hatred of freaks is *perfect*, and she could be swayed into it by
-  being offered the position by the Queen of England.
+  Petunia. Her hatred of freaks is *perfect*, and she could be swayed into it
+  by being offered the position by the Queen of England.
 
 There are lots of OCs in this work, many of whom are Goblins whose names I have
 trouble remembering, even though I'm the one who came up with them.
@@ -104,8 +106,8 @@ trouble remembering, even though I'm the one who came up with them.
   given to Petunia for the purchase of Harry.
 * Bloodrock is the Head of Foreign Tax-Related Disbursements.
 * Culthok is the Head of Hogwarts Accounts.
-* Goldknife is the Healer responsible for Harry. She yearns to someday work as a
-  Disemboweler instead.
+* Goldknife is the Healer responsible for Harry. She yearns to someday work as
+  a Disemboweler instead.
 * Lacksack is the thief Harry whose execution Harry prevented, and the first
   Liar.
 * The Matriarch is an Oracle, who counted the prophetic enemies of Harry.