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| author | Julian Blake Kongslie | 2014-05-29 14:08:57 -0700 |
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| committer | Julian Blake Kongslie | 2014-05-29 14:08:57 -0700 |
| commit | 52333416b3e0101b3635e7348f0a15ffa5c5aa09 (patch) | |
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| parent | Change to a more common spelling of deasil. (diff) | |
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Minor editing changes to make the text flavor a little nicer.
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diff --git a/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn b/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn index 260ec21..b25efb5 100644 --- a/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn +++ b/novellas/a-little-greed/01-pragmatism.mdwn | |||
| @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ mental note to contact her sister as soon as possible. Last she'd heard from | |||
| 19 | Lily, there was some trouble and she'd been told that all contact had to go | 19 | Lily, there was some trouble and she'd been told that all contact had to go |
| 20 | through the lawyers at some bank called Gringotts. Goblins, if you can believe | 20 | through the lawyers at some bank called Gringotts. Goblins, if you can believe |
| 21 | that. Whimsical nonsense; Petunia was glad her child would never get caught up | 21 | that. Whimsical nonsense; Petunia was glad her child would never get caught up |
| 22 | in such a stupid culture. | 22 | in such an abnormal culture. |
| 23 | 23 | ||
| 24 | Petunia set about preparing breakfast for herself and her family. The baby was | 24 | Petunia set about preparing breakfast for herself and her family. The baby was |
| 25 | set aside for the time in the living room; it had waited outside in the cold, | 25 | set aside for the time in the living room; it had waited outside in the cold, |
| @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ had accompanied this morning's unwelcome guest. | |||
| 29 | 29 | ||
| 30 | Well, now there's something. Her freak of a sister had gotten herself killed, | 30 | Well, now there's something. Her freak of a sister had gotten herself killed, |
| 31 | and the child was her nephew, Harry. Of course Lily's son would get dumped on | 31 | and the child was her nephew, Harry. Of course Lily's son would get dumped on |
| 32 | her in such a manner. It was just like her. | 32 | her in such a manner. It was just like Lily to be so freakish. |
| 33 | 33 | ||
| 34 | But then, it *wasn't* just like her. As much as Petunia loathed her sister, | 34 | But then, it *wasn't* just like her. As much as Petunia loathed her sister, |
| 35 | she knew Lily would never abandon her child like this. Lily was always a | 35 | she knew Lily would never abandon her child like this. Lily was always a |